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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Do not stare at the anymore the light cannot help again I fell to my knees once for you and the pain is all I remember You change you hair and clothes but the simpliest form of smile remains It keeps me singing to the clouds as I wonder where I have been. Do not stare at the stars up above they cannot tell you which way to turn Live your life as you would want but remebering how you loved before Listen to the sounds of your soul and linger softly upon the memories Then take the next way around let your eyes open up to a new way. Do not stand with your feet planted let the wind take your heart away Let yourself flow over the earth over oceans that cleanse all your pain Let your mind loose and explode with the power you have within you Open up your arms to hold your new life of warmth and pleasure. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Cool, the way you write makes me smile, you are such a sweetie! Hehehehe! Love it!  Joanna [This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-10-2002 05:57 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Oh Michael, These are some wise suggestions! For we can all love again if we open our hearts! You have such a beautiful heart Michael Thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Such a free feeling to this... enjoyed! ~Tier |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That's the spirit Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Good for You! People don't change on the inside as easily I am afriad, as they do on the outside. In my experience, if they hurt you once, they will do it again because they really never changed at all. Love, Me It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Some really good thoughts within. I enjoyed reading this so much....thought provoking....part of poetry's job! Good stuff! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Do not stand with your feet planted let the wind take your heart away Let yourself flow over the earth over oceans that cleanse all your pain Let your mind loose and explode with the power you have within you Open up your arms to hold your new life of warmth and pleasure. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THIS piece makes me feel as though my spirit could soar! Especially love this last stanza. Beautiful....just beautiful Michael. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Just as people change, so too do we change because of change. Well done. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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