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Open Poetry #18
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Streen
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since 2001-11-28
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0 posted 2002-01-07 07:15 PM

grow)gray heather
        purple twis~ting
bloom~ing
        delicate leaves(~ing




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Ladyhawke
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1 posted 2002-01-07 07:28 PM

Wow. This is certainly original.  It certainly is not deserving of the harshness of dishwater on dry hands.  Ouch! For such a short poem, it coveys a strong sense of motion-and I'm probably being silly, but also a sense of gray fuzziness.
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