When You Lift Your Veil (Tanka)

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Open Poetry #18

When You Lift Your Veil (Tanka)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-08 10:33 PM

(For the love of my dreams...my sweet Joanna "RosePetal")

When You Lift Your Veil
By: Noah Eaton
1/8/02

When you lift your veil
I can see your bright smile
Caressing your skin
Balmed in mother-of-pearl
Swooning to your warm sweet love

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-08-2002 10:34 PM).]

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-01-08 10:36 PM

awwwww...this was so sweet. I smile that brightly because of you, you make me happy. That is all a girl could ever ask for!
love you

Joanna

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

2 posted 2002-01-08 10:45 PM

Aw Noah this is so sweet, nicely written tanka. I loved that romance in it.

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-01-08 11:06 PM

Nice writing Noah...James

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2002-01-08 11:17 PM

Noah,
Cool...now about those eyes!

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-01-08 11:20 PM

Noah...This is a VERY BEAUTIFUL TANKA. Your love for Joanna shines through each carfully placed word. ***Ivy Rose

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