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Open Poetry #18
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Streen
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since 2001-11-28
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0 posted 2002-01-11 05:59 PM


   this niche:  little ti(me)ny
       out of whole: the
table: obsidian big
   fingernails dug: into
          cardboard life: isee
splinters, fragments
    paint peeled away: ontop from
        out of whole: (t) i-me
obsidian: big table life
   dug into: i i i i
splinters, fragments
     moments



I believe I am growing a penchant for the unusual.

-Streen
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with you
1 posted 2002-01-11 06:09 PM

feels like looking through the layers, to find YOU.....

with all that you are...
with all that you know...
love......
strbbux
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2 posted 2002-01-11 06:31 PM

Very very different, creative. liked it. floria
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3 posted 2002-01-11 08:13 PM

I like this unusual.  Very good.
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