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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-01-13 04:59 PM

Crisp leaves in cold winds
are memories of Monarchs
on wings of Summer

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-01-13 05:08 PM

ellie--this is a lovely way of looking at things...and I admire very much the well-written Haiku, particularly because the form befuddles my mind! (I never know when to shut up!) The visuals are perfect and you captured a mood for me. Thank you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-13 05:23 PM

I love it Ellie!! Sure do! ~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

HumbleBee
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 52
Kentucky

3 posted 2002-01-13 06:17 PM

a beautiful haiku...I enjoy writing haikus also...thanks for sharing...love it

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

4 posted 2002-01-13 06:23 PM

Watch her haiku's float
Not drown like we expected...
Praised not lost in here!

You obviously have not passed the Haiku gene onto me...my haikus stink

Your Haikus, however, are wonderful!!

Love ya mom,

Beth

[This message has been edited by Lady Lost (01-13-2002 06:23 PM).]

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-01-13 06:23 PM

Oh yes...I could see it clearly...Very well done...I have often thought of butterflies when the colored leaves fly...BRAVO!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-01-13 06:56 PM

ellie - Wonderful!!! - Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-14 03:34 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too always think of butterflies fluttering in the wind when I watch the autumn leaves sweep off the ground and drift in the air! (kiss on cheek) Such gorgeous visions, sweet friend, we all love you so much! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-01-14 03:53 PM

Ellie, how do you do that,, you say so much in a few words. Lovely. floria

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