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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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When I close my eyes I see you Your face within my mind When I listen carefully I can hear you Your voice echoing in my head When I concentrate I can feel you Your hands caressing my skin When I sleep I am with you Together in dream land When I am with you I am part of you We are one |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Really wonderful poem. Enjoyed this. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
And two be come one heart, Always. Beautiful and filled with passionate love. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Two souls having one heart, nicely done! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what you can see. . . and what you can feel. . . is shown here very well. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Definitely the way to feel, my friend...well done. jwesley |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
VERY NICELY EXPRESSED!!!! Enjoyed reading this. ***Ivy Rose |
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