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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I searched for God in a box of Fruit Loops -- since life is sweet cereal circles, it follows that God would answer me. Following that logic, I bought a raincoat and stepped outside to January frost. It wasn't long before my face turned red. It wasn't long until I learned the cost. I searched for God in a box of Fruit Loops -- now I'm searching for His decoder ring. I here the Buddah has some answers, and I need to believe in him, or anything. She said burn ... together. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh this is VERY deep....you may not think so but I find it is.. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Why thank you, PdV.  I'm not sure what t' think of it, but ah'm glad y' enjoyed it.She said burn ... together. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
"and I need to believe in him, or anything." The last line sounds lonely.. Heh, I'm not sure if that's what you were thinking when you wrote it, but it's what I feel from it.. perhaps because it is a familiar sentiment.. Luv, Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Believe me, Lynne, that was more just ... babbling than poetry on my part. But it was a fun li'l nothin' write. Glad y' enjoyed.She said burn ... together. |
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