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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg 
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Take my hand and walk We shall see the light ahead Through our dampened eyes |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Bravo, bravo bravo!!! Beautiful words, simply marvelous. Arrivederci! ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job..haven't seen a senryu in a while. Well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Alan...this form escapes me as does the other minimalist forms....always amazed at how much can be conveyed in so few words! Applause and admiration from me to you! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I don't know why, but senyrus always amaze me.. maybe because I can't seem to put them together right.. hrm.. Anyway, this is a beautiful written senryu! Very nice job  --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
awesome!! much enjoyed by me keep writing..allan   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice...especially liked "dampened eyes" |
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