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A memory without distraction

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-09-04 12:27 PM

She left bootprints in the snow.
Overnight they put on ice.
Smooth and shallow imprints.
I watched them taste the sun.

I still can see her stride,
left graphed out in the white,
the smooth path of her travel.
The surety of her way.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-09-04 01:58 PM

You are addictive!!

I truly am in awe of your words.

bah. speechless.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2003-09-04 07:03 PM

Thanks, gem. I appreciate that.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-09-04 09:40 PM

addictive..yes, that would be a good word for it

insanity is not a crime

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-09-05 04:05 AM

God, this is a beautiful line Mikey

I watched them taste the sun.

*smiling*
xxoo

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

5 posted 2003-09-05 09:32 PM

addictive kinda like chocolate but better..hey I coulda said something else

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-05-2003 09:33 PM).]

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2003-09-08 11:11 PM

A bijou, squirrel dude.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2003-09-09 02:31 PM

I appreciate that, Ed.

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