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Open Poetry #19

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-02-20 05:59 AM

I could have
a chill-rimmed glass
a simple, somewhat tart
chablis...
and ring my tongue
upon the pass--
silences--
soliloquy...
comparisons
of love in burn
I could beckon
my heart's yearn
and drown within
your eyes discern
I wish I'd learn
to set me free...

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-02-20 06:05 AM

Goblet, glass, or flagon of wine,
Downing drowning what do you find?
Gazing into the liquid’s reflection,
A mental self inspection.

Gloom
T’was in a mood for a full bodied red myself,
but any shared would be nice,
enjoyed the poem.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-02-20 06:06 AM

looking for you, yanno...???

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-02-20 02:56 PM

I like this,, a lot...floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 2002-02-20 03:55 PM

and only you can do that karen, only you - but it's nice sometimes to think others can wave that wand, eh? LOL

hugs you

C

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2002-02-20 05:40 PM

Thanks all, and C? I was just thinking last night about some of the conversations we used to have, and this is just my way of saying thank you for helping me through a nasty episode in my life. You make very good sense my friend, and I will never forget your advice for as long as I live. Thank you.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-02-20 10:40 PM

Dang, but you're good!

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-02-20 10:58 PM

I wish I'd learn
to set me free...

In due time, my friend. On that day we choose to be brave! Not a moment before. Have I mentioned, lately...you rock!

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