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The Cloak |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We dance before the moon. Naked in all but our desires - And these...we use to cloak ourselves. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
MMMMMMMMMMMM |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh Myyyyy! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Powerful, in such few words. Sandra |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Nice write Ericc, I like this, A powerful image in such few words. Jason |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
Interesting. I like the idea of cloaking ourselves in our own desires. Keep em comin |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good gosh man... you continue to become even more brief... I fear you may disappear! Please, don't! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You must have performed in the Garden of Eden! Stunning! Love, Margherita |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
How very beautiful... you say more in your few, yet well-chosen words than most can say in a thousand. It is of perfect length... too many words cloud the brilliant message, and it gets lost in the fog. In your beautiful expression, the divine message found within sparkles like a diamond touched by moon light. Thank you... for sharing such amazing beauty. Love, Moca |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eric, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, what a beautiful way to cloak the spirit with happiness forever! (big hugggsssss) I ove this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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