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Open Poetry #25
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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2003-03-03 03:48 PM


This Need

my words
could never
express the true
want in me
this need
I feel
starting with
the edges
of a
dull pain
to full
blown ache

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."
© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-03-03 04:22 PM

pretty piece
Goodknight
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Ohio, USA
2 posted 2003-03-03 04:38 PM

an eloquent and commanding defining of need - lovely poem - Paul
the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-03-03 04:42 PM

Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart
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