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Open Poetry #25

frame of mind

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-03-09 11:11 AM

In this
frame
of mind

life

can be disloged
and eaten alive
by whisps of those hands

creeping~

round the corners
of eyes

go on sitting
in lit bomb

crackling fires chant

escapee of no

seductive circumstance

just..
~stuck~

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-03-09 11:46 AM

ominous...
Peace to you and the whole of humanity.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-09-2003 11:46 AM).]

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-03-09 01:46 PM

Wow....so beautiful and creative!
Eric

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-03-09 02:32 PM

You realize you only get better and better don't you smiles

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-03-09 03:03 PM

a good write to enjoy...I enjoyed!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-03-10 11:52 PM

What a concept!

Good writing gemma~

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