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Open Poetry #25
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sperarifraai
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since 2003-03-06
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Ireland
0 posted 2003-03-11 01:15 PM

Thoughts of faces
To be without you
An eternal error
I’m broken down
Broken down sleep
In your midnight whistling
Like the icy leaves
On a fargo tree

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-03-11 03:22 PM

I loved the way you just let your emotion go out into this piece. Beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart
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