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Open Poetry #25

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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-02-17 02:39 PM

Blankly I stare
yet i do not dare
to care
I'm sitting over there
the carpet is bare
I stare
I dare
to care
sitting there
bare, I stare
blank
lost
absent

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-17 03:28 PM

Yes I like this a lot.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Quiet Acquiescence
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 70
somewhere out here

2 posted 2003-02-17 03:33 PM

Nice words. I like it.

"Remember, courage is wings."
~*~Heather Francis~*~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-02-17 03:57 PM

The feel of sheer against the skin. Nicely done. ThisDiamond

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

4 posted 2003-02-17 04:32 PM

I can definitely feel how lost you must have felt in this poem... a half-dreaming lost state of mind... drifting out halfway to nowhere.

Cool write. I like!!!

Thanks for sharing this!!

Love,
Moca

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