Ash (A haiku for the lady at Gulf Wars)

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #25

Ash (A haiku for the lady at Gulf Wars)

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2003-03-18 07:51 PM

Gray ghosts of the fire
Their warmth fades into the night
I dream of the past

paladin

....a knight without armor

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-18 07:54 PM

paladin - nicely done - ahh yes - was thinking of the past as well - different time - different place . . . xxoo

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2003-03-18 08:26 PM

Nicely done

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2003-03-18 10:09 PM

Yes, indeed, nicely done.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-03-18 10:11 PM

Very well done poet sir.
~Hugs~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-19 09:57 AM

Perfect grasp of how impossible the past is to grasp.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-03-19 10:03 AM

Paladin, very deep thoughts in a few words.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Goldboat
Member

since 2003-02-17

Posts 66

7 posted 2003-03-19 11:13 AM

very good!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2003-03-19 04:09 PM

Robert, you create powerful images in such brevity!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-03-19 08:12 PM

(sigh) Oh Robert, this is very heartfelt, sweet friend, this too gave me nostalgia and wishing I coud go back there and see all these things! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2003-03-19 08:25 PM

You encapsulate
memories with touch of whim
leaving us in awe

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.