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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2003-02-17 08:59 PM

if I take your hand, would you guide
me through the woods of my mind
would you save me from insanity
and in the end would you hold
me tight until I know
what true love
is about
until I know
me?
you?
us?
them?
until I know it all?

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (02-18-2003 03:23 AM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-02-17 09:08 PM

Ah Titia...I would hug you real tight!!
Wonderful write...so much said in so few words.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2003-02-17 09:58 PM

a walk in the woods to fall in love - charming.

btw, in line three i think it should be save in stead of safe.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2003-02-17 11:35 PM

'if I take your hand, would you guide
me through the woods of my mind'

Sure, we'll bring the dog in case we can't find our way back!!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-02-17 11:44 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2003-02-18 10:17 AM

I sure would, Titia! I would be there until the end, and there after. Hugs, my friend.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-02-18 12:26 PM

BRAVO!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-02-20 11:29 AM

Titia!

A loving cup
of questions...

I am sure
it also holds
all the answers...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-02-20 11:36 AM

Methinks you got your wish!---for you, oh wise one, do know it all!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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