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Open Poetry #25

Passion [cinquain?]

zenny
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since 2002-11-24

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Belgium

0 posted 2003-03-25 01:28 PM

Passion
Pure flames of lust
Two bodies melt in one
Purifying at full delight
Loves' play

note: i'm playing a bit with poetry forms, is this a succeeded cinquain form?
Enjoy..
Hugs, kelly

Sunshine

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1 posted 2003-03-25 01:37 PM

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Zenny, you would enjoy the Poetry Workshop. The link will take you to Nan's February "Cinquain" thread - which tells me you're fairly well on target!

Good job!

zenny
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since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

2 posted 2003-03-25 01:40 PM

thx sunshine

*me runs off to the workshop

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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Georgia

3 posted 2003-03-25 03:30 PM

well done in this good attempt at this form

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