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Open Poetry #25

My own Dream catcher

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-03-27 03:00 PM

No one knew when your time would come
we only guessed that it wouldn't be to long
Blinded by the rain of tears
as I loosen my grip of fear
I know what I must do without you here

Bending down I pick up the pieces
that was left behind
and start to rebuild my life
adding each section of you to this new future
so I will always have my own personal
DREAMCATCHER

I know you will keep me safe from any nightmare creatures
haunting my thoughts when I fall into my slumber and when I awake
the first sight to see will be pieces of you hanging next to me.

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (03-27-2003 03:15 PM).]

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2003-03-27 04:15 PM

Forward looking yet clinging to the past...an interesting composition.

INclan

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2003-03-27 05:31 PM

Hello Thomas

I was fascinated by the images portrayed through your words. This was very well written and very much enjoyed.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-03-28 08:18 AM

A very personal beautiful dreamcatcher you create here .... sad, but very imaginative
and beautifully expressed.
Love, Margherita

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