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Breathe Deep
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Breathe Deep |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Morning stars and dreams suspended stranded on edge of night distant clouds gather winter's last stand and out this window i see nothing but the distance between us imprisoned longings cling to the passing thought that these winds bear your very breath Rf |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
breathe deeply feel the soft winds perhaps she is within the very gentlest movement of air |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The distance between us does indeed make for good poetry. I so loved this view and the way you breathe her. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The gently penned...much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Robert - Very nice indeed. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Robert - I read a lot of meaning in this write, nice... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"these winds bear your very breath" Yes! Great poem! Enjoyed, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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