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Where Were You?
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Where Were You? |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Were you there when When my eyes burned with grief? Were you there when My heart was in my throat? Were you there when I longed to be with you? Were you there when I longed to pray with you? Were you there when I longed to know you? Were you there when No one else was? Were you there? Indeed you were not And in lonliness I walked My snowy path back home. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A painful outcry, well expressed. Margherita |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
Very nice, CD  It does paint a very emotional picture. Wonderful expression. I do hope that it is not you that is feeling such lonliness? |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
No indeed. Lonliness has passed; this is a reminiscent of a time before - of someone I longed to know CD |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
So sad yet beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This one makes my soul ache....I know someone who probably feels this way towards me!!!! Ouch!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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