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Open Poetry #25
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morefiah
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0 posted 2003-04-01 02:05 PM


In my conscious dreams today
I saw him. Astride he sat
my conscience; And so at play
He rode, all the time knowing that
my sanity he eroded. I burned
In my helplessness while he
my feeble denials spurned.
Dark became all I could see,
though for grace I yearned.
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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-04-01 02:50 PM

Nice I like it!
littlewing
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2 posted 2003-04-01 04:07 PM

This is awesome! I love it - nice twist . . .  xxoo
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