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Open Poetry #25

Wife beater

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-04-08 02:42 PM

Speak of the happy times
forgetting the dark rages
when hell burned in your eyes
blood spattered
she flung
like a cheap rag doll
across the room
Oh but you're sorry
make-up will make it all better
buying her roses
only gives her something
to put on her grave
when that stray blow
finally connects
Sending her to the grave.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-04-08 02:43 PM

Ouch, A hard honest write, may they all burn for hurting loved ones.
Jason

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-04-08 02:45 PM

thank you

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

3 posted 2003-04-08 02:46 PM

Great write I am involved with many calls dealing with domestic abuse
and this poem is so true
Thomas

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

4 posted 2003-04-09 03:18 AM

Very well done. I gotta put you in my library....

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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