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Open Poetry #25

Comprehending

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-15 05:29 AM

Comprehending

the sight
he had
was blind
but in
his touch
braille awakened
raised patterns
discovering vision

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-02-15 07:54 AM

Someone once told me that those without sight are the ones who see the best, and I think your words prove just that here. Great write, my friend, and thought provoking!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-02-15 10:35 AM

The beauty of your words run deep.
Eric

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-02-15 12:12 PM

Beautiful.
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-02-15 12:41 PM

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

5 posted 2003-02-15 12:46 PM

subtle as always.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-02-17 12:06 PM

Your pieces are always gentle touches.

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2003-02-17 12:22 PM

Your poetry is like a drink a fresh spring water!

Rf

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