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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Exposed there are things that I know that I wish I didn’t there are things that I wish I knew that I never will there are pains of loss that I will never understand like how you can easily touch the breeze but can not hold the wind "Wait before acting...look foward to the probably." |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Fascinating . . . as usual. I do enjoy the words you write. S A G |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, Okay, I confess...the title brought me in. But you kept me here! I like it.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - another of your thoughts penned so well... BC |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Yet another masterfully crafted thought from the mind of Helen... still one of the best. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
great poem, i really like the format |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Helen~ There are poems like this one that keeps us all coming back for more. Enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is simply beautiful...full of wonder. Eric |
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