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Wasted Time
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Wasted Time |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I thought hard today,an empty day A day of backward's moving play A day of games,and drinks,delays The day I get it right someday I worked hard today,on nothing good And when I thought,I understood The time I waste is time I could Redeem myself with something good God I havent been able to write for a week,I am so stuck.So this is how I spent my day. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Excellent rhythm to the entire poem. If this is how you spent your day it was well worth it. Keep writing even when you're in a slump, you may find that even one good line can fit into something new later on. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're not alone  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh I know and understand this TOO well!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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