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Uncloudy Day
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Uncloudy Day |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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through the fingerprints on my frigid windowpane a cloudless blue sky an inviting sight to see I'll finish cleaning later ~Tanka~ [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (02-24-2003 03:08 AM).] |
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Minister Joe Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 78TX, USA |
Cheryl, This is a great moment here in your piece--standing at the window, pausing in the midst of a task--and giving in to that urge to just go outside, and enjoy life. I would so love to give into that here--if it weren't so cold~ Thank you for sharing this, --Matt Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 amen to that! |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
very nicely done |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hi Cheryl Liked the idea here. Enjoyed. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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