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Open Poetry #25

looking for life

MissKlarmic
Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 70
Canada,N.S

0 posted 2003-02-23 05:15 PM

Let me go free
From this astranged misery
Cant you even see
How much you hurt me.
If i could say the things wrong in this world
You would pay at the top of its fold.
When you gaze into my eyes you see love
I see despise
When youve drank to the end
And there i sit trying ot mend
you think i stay out of love
Reality theres no love just a fear to deep
if only you knew what i would do
To get so very far away from you
Confess your love with another strike
This is not my life.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-23 06:24 PM

This is a cool poem. I really liked it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

2 posted 2003-02-23 06:48 PM

Very nice, greatly enjoyed.
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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