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Slothful Morning Re: Challenge
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Slothful Morning Re: Challenge |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Slothful Morning Waking up at sunrise, Yearning for tea scent, I lay my head Beside my infancy toys. Slothfully I breathe in Then exhale in exhaustion- Today I'm trapped sleepily Within my own bed. ©Feb 23, 2003 Here were the rules: 1. Only 4 words per line, 2. Has to be at LEAST 8 lines. 3. Cant use letters: A, Z, D, and C. 4. Cant use words: Dead, The, Cant, and See. 5. Must not be funny, and must make sense. Did I do it right? ~Every girl has a dream within. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (02-25-2003 01:50 PM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I sure liked it, but I think you used the letters you were not supposed to  but you sure did a great poem just the same. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty darn good to me! |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks for correcting my errors. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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