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Open Poetry #25

My First Cinquain- Visions

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2003-02-24 04:36 PM

Visions
Flittering blind
Death now as thunder strikes
Red, purple, blue sickening me
Nightmare
Nan, Do I have the right idea???

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2003-02-24 04:53 PM

Powerfully expressed in such an economy of words, Bridgette..

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-02-24 04:54 PM

I'm not Nan, but I'd say...

Yep!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-24 04:55 PM

Bridgete, this is so great. I just wrote one, too, I think.....and it's right above yours...LOL

Thanks cute, huh?

Hugs,
Ethel

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-02-24 04:59 PM

Right idea in spades!

Arent these fun? You can put so much power into so few words....

Yo, Nan -- we got two new converts!

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Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

5 posted 2003-02-24 05:16 PM

Cool!!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-02-24 08:41 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Bridgette, you've got it, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) This is very sad but wonderfully crafted, sweet friend, I hope now love has taken the scary nightmares away, believe me, I used to have them too, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2003-02-24 08:48 PM

I'm not Nan, either! But, it looks good to me.

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