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Open Poetry #25

Garden of Dreams

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-02-25 12:54 PM

Alone, in my garden of dreams
Will you bloom tonight?
I sink to fear
another late hour
left tending

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-02-25 12:56 PM

short and sweet..............nice job!
Jason

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-02-25 12:57 PM

Robert,
Enjoyed, thank you.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2003-02-25 09:40 PM

Hello Robert

The title caught my attention and I really enjoyed your words.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-02-25 09:45 PM

You make me wonder
how much time
you sit to ponder
before you write...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-25-2003 09:46 PM).]

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-02-26 04:13 AM

Enjoyed greatly.

Thanks, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-02-26 08:39 AM

Robert, I like it. A lot said in a few words.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-02-26 08:42 AM

You keep on tending and your garden will keep on blooming! Lovely poem.

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2003-02-26 08:46 AM

I loved this! I left someone tending last night...(don't feel too bad for him, he deserves it).

Susan

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

9 posted 2003-02-26 10:24 AM

Susan...thanks! never a good thing to force a flower to bloom!

Rf

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