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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-05-04 01:47 PM

Away ...
endlessly a beginning,
a love set free,
two hearts anew.

Away ...
a feeling from here to there,
the need to be,
a want of you.

Away ...
this time which separates us,
you without me,
me through and through.

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-05-04 02:16 PM

CT darling boy this is wonderful it simply throbs with an ache threaded through it. I can feel the separation deep in my soul in this. You’ve written this so incredibly well. Not many people can write emotion as well as this it’s excellent

Wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-05-04 02:42 PM

ctowen
Well done enjoyed the read.

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

3 posted 2002-05-04 02:46 PM

beautiful in it's brevity craig. Short but powerful.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-05-04 03:25 PM

Craig, I agree with the beauty of the
brevity of this. Much power and feelings
within the conciseness of this poem...

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

5 posted 2002-05-04 08:33 PM

Craig...I like this. It is well crafted.
alan

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-05-04 09:42 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is a soft and powerful heartwrenching poem, sweet friend, I think we can all relate to these feelings of emptiness every now and then but I know destiny will always keep lovers together and neevr again away in yearning! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!