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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Inferior Hurled from a broken cast Everyone was there in line But I guess that I was last Inferior Not as good as you Even though we all were born When the world was Something new Inferior On the edge of something great I look over the chasm, yawning And deem that it’s my fate Inferior Fades in the shallow pit Just enough to bury me Yet not enough to quit [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (04-09-2002 11:48 PM).] |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hey walt, your poems are always so interesting that's why I love them! I hope no one is making you feel inferior because walt, you are wonderful the way you are. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
WOW, I guess the name says it all...so I'm going to rest assured this isn't introspective! But on the otherhand, if it is, I'm gonna kick your butt!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This Inferior poem is wayout superior...  |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Perhaps this fits so many that we failed to take proper notice the first time around... |
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