Day and Night, Never Cease

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Open Poetry #20

Day and Night, Never Cease

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-05-11 07:11 PM

To my mother:

Once when flowers surrounded you,
You’ve chosen to pick the dying clown.
You nurtured her with all the love,
Through day and night, never cease.
Now the clown becomes a princess,
Watching you getting older.
In return, she swears to stay by your side,
Just like you once did,
Day and night, never cease.

//hope you all like it.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-05-11 10:21 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Eliza, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I saw the clown almost as a naive child still learning to grow up and mature, and the princess being the ending result, thanks to a mothers sweet love to make a child as happy and sweet as can be! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!