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Sit A While
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Sit A While |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Inspired by Sit Here..thankyou Professor Gloom You had time to do, you were young city time conditioned the millings of the mind like a prospector at river's edge you had what it took to maintain that hedge gold nuggets of thoughts in pans of silt it amazes me, the moments of guilt... I mean questions on how you spend your time thoughts are skewered with dandilion roots from spring flower beds... ask questions on existence? how human souls are fed time presses on you sit less... minds race away in time or escape those chores. you were born with time on your hands thoughts took form next to picket fences as you spaded out those pesky roots as you sifted for the gold you asked those questions on existence while neighbours asked you to sit time pressed on... your body stays less in one place minds race away in succession until your body will rest? only time puts us to the test [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-24-2002 11:57 PM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I am honored to inspired such a write, Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan You did that very quickly and very well, enjoyed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What's a human soul and how do you feed it? A very interesting write! I enjoyed the trip! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
ethome, I am still asking questions to that and amazed at how information gets passed on  Prof Gloom, I enjoy your writes! Sy Thanks for sharing |
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