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Open Poetry #20

While Shadows Danced

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-05-27 01:37 AM

While shadows danced
around the fire...

Her naked remembering
found meaning
in a Rose discarded,
a stranger's soft hand.

Flickering bright,
new flames sought the return
of passion, the warmth
of desire.Shadows
dancing in and out
of her empty heart.

Miss T. Eyed
Junior Member

since 2002-05-26

Posts 47

1 posted 2002-05-27 11:14 AM

Very sad, and written so the reader could feel the emotion. excellent job.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-05-27 01:22 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ivy, this is sooooo very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all who feel this emptiness and I pray that soon they can all find what they're looking for! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-05-27 02:14 PM

Sad longing in this, a discarded rose. Looking for a new bud?

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