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Open Poetry #20

Stir My Senses

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-08 01:13 PM

Stir My Senses

you’re a secret
that I keep
of how you stir
my senses deep
my soul has traced
you by your scent
time brought us
to this event
pinch of salt
that you flavor
sweetest taste
a velvet savor
tender offer
of whispers deep
echoes your name
when I sleep
recovered me
from blinding light
removed all spots
gave back my sight
delicate reach
upon my skin
walls fall down
I let you in

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-09-2002 11:53 AM).]

TwoHeartsOnePen
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

1 posted 2002-06-08 03:25 PM

Your work comes recommended to me. I can see why now. Beautiful.

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-06-08 03:38 PM

1slick_lady
Very good I like it.

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-09 07:37 PM

Spify I liked it very much.
-Neala

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