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Suburbian Snit
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Suburbian Snit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Attractive dawn arises Sexy night disguises Somewhere in the dreams I’ve lost A day of life’s surprises A child cannot refuse To grow up lest he lose All the many pairs he’ll wear Of someone else’s shoes I simply want to blend My oddness without end In seas of eccentricity Where I know that I’ll fit in White-collar blue collar Some unwritten code That I cannot wear tie-dyes And recite poetry in the road Goodnight queer suburb Take the trash out to the curb Where I’ll sit and think of these Most disturbing words |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That was totally awesome. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you  |
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TaureauRouge Junior Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 26A mass of land between two oceans |
"A child cannot refuse To grow up lest he lose All the many pairs he’ll wear Of someone else’s shoes" This stanza hit me like a ton of feathers. I read it and thought,"that means something" aaagh unfortunately for me, it's too late to really look into it. Good job |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
you need to go to cali for a little bit. neat 'right,' keep on 'truckin' in a free world |
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