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Catch My Wind
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Catch My Wind |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Catch My Wind sometimes these wings that I sometimes fly lose their luster crack and dry I try so hard to reach too fast to sun that’s when the wax just melts and runs I find when I don’t beat them so thin there is a place in grace I catch my wind |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Really like the rhythm of this one goes ... Feels so lyrical to me.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Helen....if we just slow down...seems that it all comes together better.... Nicely said! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Your pen speaks beautifully, Helen. I was always taught to do good things very slow and only beat my wings fast when I want to get away from something bad. So maybe as you fly perhaps you could just trill a sweet melody and slowly move your wings into a loving glide, breathing slowly and gently. ((Helen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Amen and so well put!! |
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