Open Poetry #20 |
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Life - first circling, then spiralling - like a river |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium ![]() |
Life like a river carrying us in measured thoughts where to, we know not flowing, travelling like a journey to a destination, unknown maybe even predestined and sometimes in its flow and amongst currents, it gets stuck for a long moment or two s p i r c i first c l, then r g n i a l l i n g around a rock or two only to rejoin the stream and continue the expedition of Life ![]() [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (04-09-2002 09:41 AM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very Creative Sudhir. I love the poem and the uniqueness of the presentation. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic Sudhir! Love the presentation! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) WOW!!! I too love the way you present your work too, sweet friend, this one flows just like the gentle cradling of a river! (big hugggsssss) May your river carry you to clear sailing of love and serenity sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very crafty my friend. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes my friend. . . the "flow" of this is excellent. . . the visual is most appreciated. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all my friends, so very much... Regards, Sudhir |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
heh - you do like to play with the images ![]() Chris |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thanks for coming by and for the "interesting"... Chris regards, sudhir |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sudhir, what a gem I find here... Fantastic writing PoetFriend... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Very creative, Sudhir, and very true. As always I enjoy what you have to say. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much, coco and Dee... regards, Sudhir |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Definitely a poem for these PIP times. She said burn ... together. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thanks you very much. Regards, Sudhir |
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