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SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 247
nc

0 posted 2001-01-01 08:56 PM


"gigdets challenge, About You"

Brown curls, eyes of green
Nose a tad too big
Cute smile I think


I wear my  heart on my
Sleeve, try to please others
So much sometimes there's
Not enough for me


Shyness holds me back at times
From what I'd like to achieve
To some it comes across as
Snobbiness so that's what they see


Hopes to one day be a teacher
Someone's life partner
And eventually a mother


Dreams to have a happy secure life
Once on my own
Make me parents proud
And at the end of a long, successful
Life to see my angel in heaven


Some dreams have come true
Like passing high school
Learning to drive
And being a little less shy


Fears of spiders, losing my family
Espically my Father, and of failing
If I do, and of being alone


Short on patience, full of love
Rarley a harsh word spoken
Unless given good reason to deserve one


Usally happy, sometimes I hide the sad
Rarley angry or mad


Attempts to be a good daughter,
Citizen, sister, and friend
And usallly by days end am happy
And waiting to see what
The next day will bring
For the girl they call
Lisa whom is me
But, is that what other's see

By: Lisa Kennedy

* Can anyone help me think of a title?*


~in order to gain, you have to lose~


© Copyright 2001 Lisa Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
gidget7
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 52
Arkansas, USA
1 posted 2001-01-13 02:29 AM


Hey, WOW I am glad you pointed this out to me, you did a  wonderful job, you were so open and honest about yourself. Of all things in this world, that is one of the hardest.I must admit, I still have not been able to bring myself to write one about mysels, Thank you for taking my challenge, I am proud of you.
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2001-01-15 04:07 PM


gidget7:

Thanks for replying to my challenge, or well yours actually lol. I guess you didn't see it right away since I didn't post it under your challenge like the others did, instead I did my own post. Sorry if I confuzed you. I'm glad you liked it, yes it is hard to be honest about yourself. Good Luck on yours!  

~Lisa~


~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~


SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 247
nc
3 posted 2001-01-15 04:10 PM


gidget7: Now I've really confuzed you I'm sure. Sorry I posted under my sisters Pan Handle, I forgot to change it.  

~Lisa~


~in order to gain, you have to lose~



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