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Open Poetry #21

Could

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-10 09:28 PM

Could

could I
sit next
to you
uncover myself
bare my soul
without worry
or rejection
could you cover
my faults
could my words
touch you
could I draw
you near
could you dare
to reach me
could you listen
to my heart
a soul
that is
screaming
in whispers
of could

gtky

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

1 posted 2002-07-10 09:31 PM

what a powerful capturing of the needs of sharing and the risk thoughts that go with it - great poem - Paul

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-10 10:25 PM

:thumbup:

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-07-11 05:23 AM

Very nice...can do...James

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2002-07-11 06:56 AM

I Always enjoy
The way
You say much
With few

right down the middle of the page

Gloom

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-07-11 06:59 AM

beautiful Helen. If we could always have the answers wouldn't life be perfect? Enjoyed.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-07-11 07:47 AM

could would should....

cool write ms slick
dug it

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-07-11 08:00 AM

Helen,
You'll get ever man on the site with this one
excellent.

turtlefreak1979
Junior Member

since 2002-05-29

Posts 20
~turtle lane~

8 posted 2002-07-11 03:16 PM

very very nice, loved it!!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-07-11 07:08 PM

ENJOY YOUR READ

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