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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2002-07-16 03:29 PM


Feathers On Concrete


I think
in abstract
a construction
of dreams
and wonder
to the feathers
of fact
can I fly
on wings
of hope
and marvel
at it’s impact
while my feet
still touch
concrete
© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-16 03:37 PM

I love the imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart
Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-07-16 04:24 PM

I'm lovin it! Keep em' comin'!! I don't think I could ever get tired of your stuff, Helen.

Kris
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