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Open Poetry #21

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sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

0 posted 2002-06-13 10:24 PM

Life does not prevail
when seeking the pot of gold
trampling dreams of youth.

Tread soft upon the path
righteousness prevailing all
who seek it's wisdom.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-06-13 10:28 PM

Amen Lady, you said so much with so few words. Great senryu

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-06-13 10:30 PM

...BEAUTIFUL!!...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-13 10:31 PM

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-06-13 10:58 PM

A perfect thought in pretty clothes. ThisDiamond

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-06-13 11:56 PM

A lot said with so few words, Sigh...
and beautifully done, indeed!

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2002-06-14 12:15 PM

inspirational..and concise

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-06-14 12:59 PM

lovely words..

Lauren~

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

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