A Smile in Moonlight (probably written while possessed by mike :) )

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Open Poetry #21

A Smile in Moonlight (probably written while possessed by mike :) )

Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

0 posted 2002-07-27 10:15 AM

If you're wondering what th' hell that there in the subject means...

The very second the first line of this poem came into my head, I was thinking "that is so not something I would write; that's Mike's voice!" And the words kept coming... In the same voice.

So, somehow, Mikhail, you possessed me at work last night.

Maybe you dreamed a poem and it came in through my pen? I d'nah.

A Smile in Moonlight

She is a quiet girl.

She smiles in accents
and coloured hues
of moonlight's rising.

Her fragile mouth
moves in words
that cannot find voice,
floating by
on an endless
diamond stream.

The words,
so empty, plead
"love me"
as the moon sets
and the light
fades from her smile.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

[This message has been edited by Anvrill (07-27-2002 10:16 AM).]

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

1 posted 2002-07-27 10:22 AM

Possessed or not Lori~ I think you've found your softer poetic voice!!!

You've put imagery in the moon..and? *that* is my favorite thing to see!!!

take care you!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-07-27 10:28 AM

Her fragile mouth
moves in words
that cannot find voice,
floating by
on an endless
diamond stream.
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He influences your pen in very cool ways