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Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

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Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2002-08-04 11:18 AM

All through the night
I moved with wizzing lights,
Just trying to keep on moving,
With the world that night,

And when I stopped it carried on,
Lights whizzed along all but one,
I found myself so still in time,
While I did the world still carried on,

And as I complated night turned to day,
Day turned to night, I lost my way,
When time stopped in me I froze still,
Until I moved on from this day.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-08-04 11:22 AM

Maria, I had the sensation of being
in a star shower while reading this piece...
very lovely...

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2002-08-04 11:33 AM

Cool didnt imagine it that way but cool

thanks

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2002-08-04 11:37 AM

Sounds like the hustle bustle routine of a very busy city at night to me. All the lights wizzing by in fast forward when all we are searching for is a moment of peace.

**********

When time stopped in me I froze still,
Until I moved on from this day.

Sometimes all we can do is await the dawn of a new day. I hope I didn't miss completely on this one but if I did then at least you gave me some very vivid visuals in my screwed up mind. LOL Either way........I enjoyed it much.

Moon Dust

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Skelmersdale, UK

4 posted 2002-08-04 11:42 AM

No you read it right Mark

thanks for reading

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-04 12:00 PM

Moon Dust - it's funny how time flys away to quickly. Doesn't seem like it at times, but it does...

BC

Moon Dust

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Skelmersdale, UK

6 posted 2002-08-04 12:03 PM

Yeah I know or how slowly it passes too

thanks for replying

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Nan

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7 posted 2002-08-04 12:09 PM

We can be a part of life or we can watch it pass us by... Nicely done, Maria..

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-08-04 12:15 PM

Moon Dust
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Moon Dust

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Skelmersdale, UK

9 posted 2002-08-04 12:19 PM

Nan - but sometimes I like watching

Sy - Thank you 4 reading

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-08-04 01:54 PM

(smiles) Oooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, this made e feel like I was in a Matrix scene going fast-forward! LOL! Kind of an interesting way to look it, but I truly love the feel of this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Moon Dust

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Skelmersdale, UK

11 posted 2002-08-04 05:53 PM

Oh i so love that film

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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