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Open Poetry #21

Chilled Colors

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-04 03:43 PM

Chilled Colors

sometimes
my dreams turn cold
that once was
vivid and bold
taking flight
to black and white
the chilling colors
of my night
this should be
a place so sweet
but close my eyes
to find defeat

Diane Coway
Member

since 2002-08-01

Posts 61
USA

1 posted 2002-08-04 04:13 PM

This one...I can relate,

Worded well. Short and to the point.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-08-04 04:44 PM

Slick....you are probably better at the
short and sweet than anyone here at PiP.
Always a good message...always to the
point.....Must be all of that training
that teaches you to be that way....

Nice write...

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