Untitles- can some one title it please

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Open Poetry #21

Untitles- can some one title it please

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-08-11 11:03 PM

one day forever more
learn to fly
soar through out the land
holding my hand
why won't you let go
i can make it on my own
let my heart tell my brain
what really should be mine
I'm not a lonely little girl

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-08-11 11:07 PM

Maybe you could call it On My Own? I like this.

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-08-11 11:30 PM

I agree with Beth, Kellie...
I think that would be an excellent title...
and I too, really liked your poem.

~ lots of hugs from a chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

3 posted 2002-08-12 12:28 PM

Perhaps Solitaire..

should fit well...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-12 12:44 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Kellie, I just know you will fly and your lonely heartn will forever be embraced with loves hope! (sigh) I think "Achieving Liftoff" would be a great title, but either way this poem is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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