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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Word-whispers in the note she sent. I can hear her voice in every line. Can almost smell her rain of scent. Can almost feel her in recline. Word-whispers in the drugstore aisle. Lipstick tubes in plastic hold. Wondering which go to her smile. Which colors to make her bold? Word-whispers in radio drive. Turning up a Peppers song. Something of her, bass alive. Something in this wait is long. Word-whispers in moving type. A poem made for her to read. Something sad within this kiss. Some small whisper of my need. * I love you, Lori-Anne. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I love you too, Mikhail. Immer und fur Ewigkeit.  Oh, and I love yr poetry, too.  Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very sweet and romantic Mike! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, Nancy! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
romantically captivating! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Michael, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love your creative use of description, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Word-whispers in the note she sent. I can hear her voice in every line. Can almost smell her rain of scent. Can almost feel her in recline. ============================== gawwd I love that verse..... yer so cool when youre in love  When your own emptiness is all thats getting through, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I thought you'd appreciate that, Butterfly Slippers. I dipped into the Serenity book of cool verse structure for that one.These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
methinks you give me way too much credit-- this is beautiful. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mike darling boy Utterly utterly wonderful writing YOU darling boy never disappoint. Wonderful absolutely perfect poetry, YOU do know I utterly utterly love it don’t you? Of course you do.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Aha, I noted a similarity to a Serenity poem here, and I was right. Now isn't that cool? Hey, this poem is fantastic. Sandra |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
way too enjoyable. you're good at this....REALLY good don't stop your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I won't stop ... but I should stop at work, huh? Oops...These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSquirrel~ Romantically captivating .. I loved EVERY line of it~ *sigh* 'Word-whispers in the note she sent. I can hear her voice in every line. Can almost smell her rain of scent. Can almost feel her in recline.' More *sighs* ..... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah how romantic....word-whispers, I just love it. Charisma |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beautiful..........gives me shivers.....just beautiful |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
An' it's all fr me!Lori, you lucky grrl. Maybe I should quit talking to myself... Hm. "I'd rather be anything but ordinary, please." -Avril Lavigne |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
B-not-a-squirrel: a poet should have the grace of words as the phrases should not quarrel. You are a great peacemaker jeff |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow! How'd this humble thing garnish so many responses? Thank you all!These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
Ohhhh..goodness..I love this for a lot of reasons. Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, 2H1P. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Squirrel, this is precious... I shall thread your poem in2 my library4many more reads in days ahead... Thanx4this is a most enjoyed poem2read... *~coco~* |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks for bringin' it back to the light, CB.She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I like when your stuff resurfaces. It's a cool li'l surprise. Yr love is overwhelming, baby.written in blood before everything went black |
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thejingler Junior Member
since 2002-07-21
Posts 15NC |
While the humble jingler does not have the depth of understanding to truly appreciate these poetic words he does indeed like the hat. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Aw yeah, doesn't the hat rock? I made him buy it! My loathing of baseball caps is an incredible thing.  written in blood before everything went black |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, jingler. Yep, Lori's responsible for my new trademarked appearance (trademark void everywhere).Mike She said burn ... together. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so very romantic, Mr.Squirrel... Lori is a lucky lady, indeed to have found herself such a wonderful poetic rodent. My husband is very wonderful but he doesn't write poetry... oh well..... I love him dearly anyway ~ hugs from the heart of a chipmunkLyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
She said burn ... together. |
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