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Hope for today
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Hope for today |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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She is today. A place to lose the chill of autumn. A road that swallows itself in the heat. Windows face the snowy pines. Press my fingers to the glass. The sea is blackest before light. Sun touches the edge of hill. A small red line of a new day. I hope for this one she will stay. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. -RHCP [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-24-2002 02:12 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
OOhh...deep AND frilly...(yes...ahem- frilly) who do you manage it Mopesalotforgoodreason??? seriously though...can visualize this love quest within... "She is today. A place to lose the chill of autumn" *shivers* at that Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! YES!! "She is today. A place to lose the chill of autumn. A road that swallows itself in the heat." Beautiful m'friend!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
you have typed a spectacular photograph into my mind with this write...(hmmm, i think i will have to use that in the future)  Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Baby.... If you're still holding onto the chill of autumn in a southern Cali summer, yr insane. You hopeless romantic. I love you so much. "I'd rather be anything but ordinary, please." -Avril Lavigne |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Splendid writing Squirrel... It's a nice treat2have found this... Smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (07-24-2002 02:04 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an image! I love the new pic too |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow, thanks for resurrecting these poetic bones. I'd almost forgotten I wrote it...Mike She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I'd almost forgotten, too. I was surprised to see I'd already replied. Whee. Me just woke up.written in blood before everything went black |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bsquirrel There is always hope she will stay. Enjoyed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks for yr reply, ST. She said burn ... together. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely description of sunrise, Mr.Squirrel, and I like your new pic also. BTW, there was a little squirrel on our birdfeeder today. He just sat there and ate like he was a bird. Then when he tried to fly off the feeder, he fell down and landed on the ground....... what a sight!  ~ furry rodent hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the feel of this poem, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That was me! *chirp chirp* Wow ... did I just do that? Uh ... Thanks Lyra and Noah. She said burn ... together. |
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